The teachers who graded me in the preliminary advised me to footnote my sources and talk about the research I did in order to get better grades in Criteria C and D. They also thought that I should mention my AoI, Community and Service, in the Reflection on Learning section.
This feedback was incredibly helpful and I followed their advice and changed my report. They praised the fact that my project was pretty much finished and found it interesting that my project could have a legacy.
I will be writing more about their feedback after my full meeting with Mr Moore to discuss improvements to my project.
All in all, I hope to finish the report by Monday and then spend time checking over it with Mr Moore. I want to get as many people as possible to proofread it, probably during the break.
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